https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W0R28KrlK0A
I got a lot of positive feedback on my last pitch with the exception that I try to be clearer with the delivery of my pitch next time. The positive feedback revolved around the overall tone and confidence that I had while performing my speech.
Upon revision of my last pitch, I noticed that my delivery indeed could have been clearer. I do think this pitch is superior to the second one because I did this one earlier in the day and you can notice that in the lighting and my face looked more refreshing. The memorization of the pitch itself remained the same, but I would say that I felt more comfortable in front of the camera and did not rush as much. My energy levels could have been more consistent, but that is because I tried to put in more effort towards the delivery and enunciate my words as clearly as possible.
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Assignment 30A - Final Reflection
This class has definitely been an experience which I will remember, for several reasons. The most formative experience for me was the f...
Hey man,
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